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I'll kill you in your sleep
if you dare look at me again
I hate your gaze
I feel like you undress me
your stare is not one I like
I wish you would leave me alone
I've always felt uncomfortable
when you are even near
I'm probably just being lame
it's probably all in my mind
but how could it be?
You just seem so scary
I would hate to be alone with you
I would be scared out of my mind
please stop looking at me
please stop talking to me
I don't like those looks toward me
©2006-2009 ~ichigo-ga-daisuki
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:iconxxintoxicatingliesxx:
Thats really... powerful... I can deffinantly feel alot of emotion in this one... well done :)

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.:: We Can Only Be Wise Through Experience ::.
:iconsockr1110:
This is very well written. So simple, yet it evokes such strong feelings. Good job. :highfive:
:iconvampirik:
It sort of hitted cose to home. Very powerful.

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"I miss you, so far and the collision of your kiss just made it so hard"--MCR
:icondanielle42:
wow. this is defidently a poem you can feel. Great job! *wonders who you are talking about*

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.] Danielle [.

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